Tuesday, April 27, 2010

An example of 'show not tell' by Leeanne.

It was like i had my eyes closed but, they were wide open as i felt my way around the mat black room , stumbling as i walk feeling for an exit. I feel a handle I turn it ...I pull and ......

2 comments:

  1. Great writing Leanne, it really makes me feel like I'm there, a sign of a good writer. Well done! :)

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  2. Good stuff Leanne, when you 'show don't tell' you build a real feeling of suspense.

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