We are Room 13 from Tawa Intermediate in Wellington, NZ. Our teacher is Miss Speedy.
The purpose of our blog is to share what we are learning and give an audience for our writing.
Tuesday, April 27, 2010
An example of 'show not tell' by Leeanne.
It was like i had my eyes closed but, they were wide open as i felt my way around the mat black room , stumbling as i walk feeling for an exit. I feel a handle I turn it ...I pull and ......
Great writing Leanne, it really makes me feel like I'm there, a sign of a good writer. Well done! :)
ReplyDeleteGood stuff Leanne, when you 'show don't tell' you build a real feeling of suspense.
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